A Circle on the Surface by Carol Bruneau

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In 1956, Enman Greene takes his twelve-year-old daughter Penelope out for lunch at a Halifax fish ’n’ chip shop. She believes it’s for her birthday, but Enman has actually brought her there to reveal a secret: the truth about Penelope’s mother.

Once Enman begins his story, A Circle on the Surface (Vagrant Press, forthcoming in 2018), the fifth novel by Nova Scotia author Carol Bruneau, sweeps back to 1943 and the fictional Nova Scotia town of Barrein. It’s a time of great uncertainty, not only because of the war that looms over the lives of the town’s inhabitants, but because of the turmoil brewing between Enman and his new wife Una.

Una and Enman have moved to Barrein to care for Enman’s elderly mother. Una doesn’t like small-town living, however, nor does she like being caregiver to her mother-in-law, a role which has been thrust upon her largely by default. To escape her growing unhappiness, she spends much of her time wandering the beaches alone, where she encounters a mysterious stranger.

The novel is inspired in part by rumors from the war era that German submarine crews attempted to land on Nova Scotia beaches, though Bruneau’s book is not really a war story. Rather, the close proximity of enemy soldiers underscores this psychological portrayal of a couple struggling to cope with roles society has placed upon them. When Una realizes their move to Barrein may not be temporary, she also realizes: “Marriage meant taking on not just one person but their clan and an entire place. She felt stupid for only realizing it now.”

Bruneau’s novel abounds in rich language that is often connected to the emotional state of the characters. When Una hears on the radio that Germans like to attack under fog, she muses that she “loved fog, the way, in town, it drew itself like a sleeve up the length of the city’s peninsula,” hinting at Una’s attraction to the intrigue of the German soldiers, and especially the stranger she has met on the beach. The author’s use of imagery also creates a profound sense of place: the sea in particular is ever-present in the lives and dreams of the characters. The setting, in fact, is so detailed and omnipresent that it sometimes feels like an additional character.

A Circle on the Surface is told from the alternating perspectives of Enman and Una, but the final section is told primarily from Enman’s point of view. I found this a little jarring because, as the story reaches its climax, the reader is largely shut out from Una’s experience. (This is a distinct contrast from the beginning of the book, which readily shares Una’s perspective.) However, Bruneau’s ending effectively connects the reader back to its true storyteller: Enman, who can never know the real motivation behind Una’s actions.

The book ends as it began, with father and daughter in the fish ’n’ chip shop. Woven throughout Enman’s story is a bittersweet sense of loss but also hope, both of which he finds most in his daughter: “In the blink of an eye,” he thinks, “she’ll be gone—as sure as buds become leaves and sounds become notes.”

Watch for “Animal Kingdom,” a new short story by Carol Bruneau, forthcoming in Understorey Magazine Issue 14.

About Michelle Deines

Michelle Deines is an award-winning writer who works in multiple genres, including poetry, non-fiction and drama. Poetry publications include works in The Writer’s Cafe, Event Magazine, and The Malahat Review, and her non-fiction has appeared here in Understorey Magazine, Canadian Dimension, and briarpatch. Her plays include A Dog at a Feast and Ghosts in Baghdad, which was nominated for the Jessie Richardson Vancouver Theatre Award for Outstanding Original Script in 2014, and won the Special Merit Prize in Theatre BC’s Playwriting Competition in 2013. Michelle teaches at Capilano University, and has an MFA in Creative Writing from UBC. She lives in Vancouver. michelledeines.com

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